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Re: Terror of the Batman - a fan script
« Reply #11 on: Thu, 8 Sep 2011, 21:24 »
EXT. STEPS OF GOTHAM COURTHOUSE – THE NEXT DAY

(A crowd of adoring fans has gathered yet again as HARVEY stands before a podium on the steps, an entourage including GORDON behind him. He is at his finest; a politician, reverend, and preacher all together, and none of it coming off as an act.)

HARVEY
…And I want to make it perfectly clear: Commissioner Gordon had nothing to do with Johnny Viti’s escape last night. He was not even informed of Viti’s transfer to Arkham. He has endured some of the worst times our city has ever seen, and deserves our continued support!
(The crowd gives mild applause, but they’re not here to hear about the police commissioner. They’re here for HARVEY. He goes on.)
Joey Gazzo remains in the Gotham Penitentiary, and it is there he will stay. And it’s where “The Boss” Maroni will find himself very soon!
(Applause again follows, but this is much more enthusiastic and wilder.)
Campaign season’s filled with a lot of hyperbole. My opponent’s made a few wild claims that never panned out. What was that he said about The Roman? “The charges will never stick; he’ll never even have to set foot in court!”
(The crowd laughs. A man in sunglasses and a fedora pulled low silently makes his way up towards the podium.)

HARVEY (cont’d.)
Things worked out a little different, didn’t they? I don’t go in for that kind of false prediction. So when I tell you that Halloween is the last holiday that Maroni will see as a free man, you can bet I know what I’m talking about!

(The crowd is euphoric now; cries of “Apollo!” have begun again. Not noticed in the slightest is our man in glasses, who reaches the front of the mass of people, draws a revolver, and springs forward, letting off two shots that send everyone to the ground…except HARVEY. A horrid look that has now become familiar is in his eyes yet again. He shoots his right arm out, seizing the gun hand of his would-be killer. The gun falls as his wrist is snapped. HARVEY now swings back his left and lands a solid punch into the killer’s jaw, knocking him down onto the steps. HARVEY clearly has worse in mind for this mob clown…until another pair of hands restrains his. GORDON has risen to his feet and recognizes what has come over his friend. A stern look brings HARVEY back to his senses. Both look up to realize that the crowds have risen up as well, and are crazier than ever for their beloved DA…)

INT. THE BATCAVE – AT THE SAME TIME

(BATMAN has taken in the entire scene courtesy of one of five video screens on a desk. A copy made of HARVEY’s psychiatric profile is spread out over the other four. Split-screens allow him to have both the full page and certain blown-up phrases on one monitor: phrases such as “unstable,” “split personality,” “signs of schizophrenia,” and “Jonathan Crane,” all scrawled in old-fashioned cursive.)

(ALFRED descends the stairs and gets a look at what BATMAN has been working on.)

ALFRED
Am I to presume that the day is not far off that you will suspect me of some wrong-doing?

BATMAN
Harvey has a real problem, Alfred.
(He scrolls down one of the pages. We see the words “symptoms began in childhood” and “age eight.” BATMAN eyes them curiously.)
He shouldn’t be doing this.

(He nods to the scene in front of the courthouse.)

(ALFRED nods. He looks over the screens again.)

ALFRED
That name “Crane” is familiar. Where do we know him from?

BATMAN
I studied under a Jonathan Crane in New York. He’s dead now. This Crane is a psychologist at Arkham.

ALFRED
Mr. Dent must be paying him quite a sum for private appointments. But if I may, sir, is it necessary to worry about our old friend? He has managed so far with this problem.

(BATMAN does not answer. He continues to eye the name “CRANE.”)

BATMAN
Set up an appointment, Alfred.

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Re: Terror of the Batman - a fan script
« Reply #12 on: Fri, 9 Sep 2011, 04:20 »
Great!

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Re: Terror of the Batman - a fan script
« Reply #13 on: Fri, 9 Sep 2011, 09:08 »
DUDE. Where have you been!!!?

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Re: Terror of the Batman - a fan script
« Reply #14 on: Mon, 12 Sep 2011, 15:13 »
Busy  ;)

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Re: Terror of the Batman - a fan script
« Reply #15 on: Wed, 18 Jul 2012, 18:52 »
An update long in coming: the artist I had originally partnered with started posting pages for this story on BOF. I haven't asked him about posting it here, but if I get the OK, I'll stop posting script elements and start posting his pages. For now, here's the next bit:

INT. ARKHAM ASYLUM LOBBY – LATER THAT DAY

(The lobby is the only part of Arkham that seems human. It is clean, white, and neat. BRUCE WAYNE sits impatiently, eyeing a stack of old magazines as if unsure how to begin the cliché of reading them. He is spared the effort when a NURSE steps over to him.)

NURSE
Dr. Crane will see you now.

(BRUCE is led down the halls to the door to CRANE’s office. It is open. There sits DR. CRANE, with the same dead eyes and same rat hair. BRUCE is frozen; that is his DR. CRANE!)

CRANE
Well, well, well. Bruce Wayne. The prodigal son returns. Come in, boy, come in. I don’t have much time to spare.

(BRUCE is still frozen. The NURSE gives him a slight nudge, and he finally makes his way into the room, sitting down across from CRANE, who wears his curious, joyless smile.)

CRANE
It’s been almost thirteen years, hasn’t it? I lost track of you after you left the country. I’ve been quite disappointed in you, I must say. A dreary blue blood sitting in on boardroom meetings and throwing money towards charitable causes and inspiring politicians? You had such a talent for the power of fear. And such anger at something. I was so sure you’d find a role to play to make use of your…unique talents.

(BRUCE shifts uncomfortably; what is his old teacher getting at? And besides…)

BRUCE
I thought you were dead.



CRANE
But still so direct. The reports were greatly exaggerated, as it goes. Here I sit, a new addition to the Arkham family, studying the fears of the criminally insane.

BRUCE
Right. But you agreed to see me.

CRANE
I always have time for patients and old students, especially those with such morbid and fascinating pasts as yours. What can the good doctor do for you?

(BRUCE is frozen again; CRANE is alive?)

BRUCE
Nightmares. I’ve had nightmares.

CRANE
A rather dull ailment, but interesting if they’re from your mind. Are they anything like the ones you used to have in your college days? I’ve quite a memory, you know. Falling pearls, spilt popcorn, horrid cries and a sinister saying – and what else? Some sort of monster. A bat, perchance?

(BRUCE freezes yet again. What did he mean by that?)

(A welcome interruption comes in the form of a phone call. CRANE answers, listens for a moment, then hangs up and rises.)

CRANE
Sit tight, dear Bruce. I shan’t be long.

(EXIT CRANE)

(BRUCE allows himself a heavy sigh of relief before springing out of the chair and darting behind CRANE’s desk. He pulls open the first drawer he can get his hands on and starts thumbing through the files when he realizes that he is standing on something other than floor. He looks down; at the feet of CRANE’s chair is a pile of straw. He almost bends down to look at it when he spies a picture on CRANE’s desk. It is of CRANE, from younger days. There are no glasses and his hair is not so slick, but the eyes are as dead as those that BRUCE just looked into. This is the CRANE that was the teacher of a young BRUCE…)

INT. A COLLEGE CLASSROOM – BRUCE’S MIND, B&W

(An adolescent BRUCE WAYNE sits in the front row of a large campus classroom. While the students around him seem bored, he is like a laser beam – intensely focused, eyes blazing with both some private demon and the thirst for the knowledge that will banish that demon. Conducting the class is DR. CRANE, a white lab coat over his tweed suit. He is the only soul besides BRUCE with any life to him as he pours his whole heart into his lecture. We get tight close ups on some of the things he has written on the chalkboard: “TERROR,” “PSYCHOLOGICAL FRAILTY,” “POWER OF FEAR.”)

INT. COLLEGE HALLWAYS – BRUCE’S MIND, B&W

(BRUCE is walking down the halls. While everyone around him has a friend or a girlfriend or a companion of some sort, he is alone, draped all in black. He stops at a door marked “DR. JONATHAN CRANE.” A poster has been tacked on. Again, we see close-ups of certain words: “FEAR EXPERIMENT,” “VOLUNTEERS NEEDED.”)

INT. A SMALL HALL CLOSET – BRUCE’S MIND, B&W

(In this land of pitch-black save for one square glass window through which minimal light shines, BRUCE sits in an old wooden chair, his hands and feet bound. Sweat pours down his face and he shifts and shakes in his chair, desperate to move toward the door but unable to do more than shuffle the chair slightly back and forth. In the room with him are a string of pearls tacked to the wall, a mess of popcorn spilt all over the floor, and eight large vampire bats flying about. BRUCE is already covered with bloody bites and nips – the only color in this world – and the bats show no signs of stopping. Through the glass, we see the silhouette of DR. CRANE, wearing his joyless smile and taking notes.)

INT. COLLEGE HALLWAYS – BRUCE’S MIND, B&W

(BRUCE leans up against a wall, listening in on the conversation taking place inside the nearby dean’s office. CRANE is being torn a new one by the DEAN. We cut quickly inside the room to see the DEAN hurl down a report, and we get close-ups on the words “UNETHICAL” and “TERMINATED.”)

EXT. COLLEGE GROUNDS AT NIGHT – BRUCE’S MIND, B&W

(It is night. BRUCE watches as fire trucks depart, and we see that an entire wing of the school has smoke and steam pouring off of it; there has just been a fire.)

EXT. A COLLEGE NEWSSTAND – BRUCE’S MIND, B&W

(A newspaper sits at the top of the newsstand, bearing the headline “FIRE ENGULFS SCHOOL” with the sub-heading “DISMISSED PROFESSOR CRANE PRESUMED DEAD.”)

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Re: Terror of the Batman - a fan script
« Reply #16 on: Thu, 19 Jul 2012, 14:12 »
Good stuff. Hope you get his permission so we'll see the finished pages.

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Terror of the Batman - a fan script
« Reply #17 on: Thu, 19 Jul 2012, 18:56 »
Agreed!

 

    
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